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#201 Simon Edmondson

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Posted 23 August 2017 - 12:21 PM

Almost done with the  edit. Feedback received  suggested  one further scene was needed.Showing Bill arriving at the house  sometime after Doris on her bike. This is  the first half of that and an adaptation of one already used. The second half will be of him getting out of the car.

 

I hadn't  applied  any maps to make this figure older and am beginning to think I should.He's one of the nosey neighbours keeping track of everybody else.

 

Any critical feedback very welcome indeed,

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Posted 31 August 2017 - 06:08 AM

Some technical glitches and map alignments to sort out but, this is the whole scene.

But, does it read as a sequence. Is there any doubt about whats going on ?

 

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The glitches included the sky layer no longer rendering, except as a series of black dots ?

and the constraints on the binoculars dropping out erratically and needing to be reset.

this in V17 under OSX

 

Hope to realign the maps then render out at 1080. Before finalising the whole thing.

Off on holiday in a few weeks so intend to re render the whole project at a consistent quality and while thats going through, do the sound. Anticipating the render taking several week  if not months. Will buy some  more network permits to speed it up. Some 720p renders  were taking 3 hours to do  on standard settings as there are a lot of reflective surfaces.


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Posted 31 August 2017 - 11:44 AM

Flashing sky looks like lightning.  :) 

 

I'm going to guess that some mistaken key frames are causing that.

 

I presume this is just a quick render and that's why there are no shadows.

 

 

The sequence makes sense.  Is that guy really supposed to have such wide hips?  From a distance I thought it was a female.

 

 

Some curve flattening would probably fix the sliding feet.


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Posted 31 August 2017 - 11:54 AM

Flashing sky looks like lightning.  :)

 

I'm going to guess that some mistaken key frames are causing that.

 

I presume this is just a quick render and that's why there are no shadows.

 

 

The sequence makes sense.  Is that guy really supposed to have such wide hips?  From a distance I thought it was a female.

 

 

Some curve flattening would probably fix the sliding feet.

Robert

Thank you for your reply and feedback.The flashing sky was an error caused by  the layer being turned on at the wrong time. The shadows ? I'm not at all sure about. Its not a quick render and shadows are turned on in the render panel but non are showing up I'm just about to have a look and see what might be causing that.

I hadn't noticed his hips before but someone else did mention it. I shall adjust them in a short while.

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Posted 31 August 2017 - 02:55 PM

Bill One 101.png

 

This was rendered using ambient occlusion, set at 75%

I really like the  look of the lighting but, the reflections in the window ,and parts of the sky layer, have got black specs, like dust on a negative, is there a way to avoid that and still keep the look of the ambient lighting ?

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Posted 31 August 2017 - 03:59 PM

 

 

This was rendered using ambient occlusion, set at 75%

I really like the  look of the lighting but, the reflections in the window ,and parts of the sky layer, have got black specs, like dust on a negative, is there a way to avoid that and still keep the look of the ambient lighting ?

thank you

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You could do two renders.

 

One that does the AO right and one the that does the reflections right and composite them together.

 

For the AO render you could set all the reflecting surfaces to a solid pure color (100% ambience) and use that in your compositor to "green screen" in the portions from the reflection render.

 

Hand painting should not be necessary for this.

 

Of course, test that out with one frame before you re-render the whole sequence.

 

If the camera never moves, you'd only have to render one reflection frame.


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Posted 01 September 2017 - 12:04 AM

Try setting the ambient occlusion > Occlusion Sampling a little bit lower / higher and see what it does change.

 

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Posted 01 September 2017 - 02:39 AM

Robert, Gerald

Thank you for your helpful  suggestions, I shall try them out today.

While pondering over it last night, I stumbled across this, which isn't what I was  after but,I do like the look of and, it does add a  darker tone to the nosey neighbour thread.

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Posted 08 September 2017 - 05:09 AM

Had a few problems with consistency of renders, mapping, lighting and colour seemed to vary without warning  but, this is the final sequence before re rendering  the whole project and trying to get the sound done properly.

Any critical observations very welcome.

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Posted 08 September 2017 - 05:25 AM

I'm fairly certain the room lighting is changing because it has keyframes making it do that.

 

I preferred the version where he was silhouetted against the brighter room.

Are those motorcycle spoke reflective? It would be simpler to make them a regular color.

 

It's a bit odd that the scene seen directly is darker and grayer than when seen in teh binocular lenses.

 

The man getting out of the car seems to have lost all contrast on his face.

 

 

When I'm trying to run down lighting problems I find it easier to do half or quarter size renders and just a few frames per second.  That will usually catch things like drifing lights or other mistakes without having to wait for a full render.


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Posted 08 September 2017 - 07:24 AM

Robert

Thank you for your reply and help. Very much appreciated.

 

The spokes are just "render as lines" without any other  material setting. Think so, they were done about 12 months or so ago.

The lack of contrast in the figure seemed to be a consequence of the global AO settings, as it was done  without direct lighting. 

I quite like that look as its close to  how it looks in twilight after the sun has gone down, before it gets dark.

 

I had trouble with a lot of "noise" creeping in to the renders in the form of dark grains appearing on the sky maps and the garage door when doing the binocular lenses They were done with only single pass renders, multiple pass renders seemed to ease that.

 

I think the reflected light in the binocular lens looks brighter because of the contrast with the  darkness of the figure behind ? Its all part of the same scene, rendered with the same lighting conditions. Only the camera view changes. I will check it thoroughly when I do the final render.

 

I think the change in the mapping above the garage door  occurred because it was rendered with Multiple copies rather than Network  render and I accidentally tweeked a setting  somewhere. Likewise with the lighting in the room.

 

I liked the version with the lighter room but thought this worked better because of the darkness, making it slightly more intrusive spying by the    neighbour ?

 

I'm off on holiday next week and the intention is to set it all up on Network render and  redo the whole project to get more even results. The render times are  very long because of the AO and the reflection settings so, to redo the whole thing is going to take several weeks if not months.  Intend to use that time to re record the dialogue and do the sound FX.

 

One thing I do like about computers is that they can be working flat out while you're doing something else. Its started to feel like digital enslavement the past few weeks as I've tried to get the animation  and narrative sequence set. The first holiday in five years will be very welcome.

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Posted 17 September 2017 - 11:11 AM

Unfortunately illness got in the way of the holiday so its back to rendering.

 

Following some feedback on Facebook, I decided to try a split screen section. With the car arriving on the bottom half and the  neighbour with the binoculars on the top half. When his  part finishes,  it moves to a female neighbour watching, while having a cup of tea ( very english !),  as Bill gets out of the car.

 

What I was after is the tea drinker standing in the shadows watching, with the scene below of the car exit reflected in the window she is looking through. ( hope that makes sense ?) Haven't finalised the composition yet but, this was an attempt at the look.

 

Nosey E 101.png

 

As you can see, a lot of 'noise' crept into the render and I wonder if anyone can suggest a way to avoid that ?

 

It was done with AO lighting, no spotlights or key light, because I wanted that twilight look. I had  the same trouble when rendering the car arriving for the lower half, with the same sort of noise appearing on the garage door but, that seemed to go when I upped the sample level to 100%

 

The render time for 1080 was 8hours 30 mins for the frame, rendered with 5 passes. Don't mind the time so much, but the noise makes it unusable.

 

Tried a version using a key light and no AO,  this was the VGA result. Render time was about two minutes or less ! )

Nearer what  was wanted but, would prefer  a subtler blend of reflections.

 

Nosey F 110.png

 

 

Can anyone kindly suggest a cause, and a cure, for the noise problem ?

Thanks in advance.

simon


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Posted 17 September 2017 - 11:17 AM

I think it's a too-confusing arrangement of elements for the viewer to read what it is.  I'm looking at it and i can't figure out what is where.

 

 

So this is not a reflection scene?


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Posted 17 September 2017 - 11:39 AM

Robert

Thank you or your reply.

It is a reflection scene. She is inside a house looking out at the car arriving on the opposite side of the street. I think the confusion arrises from the side window  in the room she is standing in? You can see through that into next doors garden and  the reflections to the front.

I shall try a different composition

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Posted 17 September 2017 - 01:34 PM

I think the confusion arrises from the side window  in the room she is standing in? You can see through that into next doors garden and  the reflections to the front.

 

 

Yes.  I didn't even realize that was what I was seeing.


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