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#1 kwhitaker

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Posted 20 June 2009 - 09:27 PM

Thought I show how witch Lena's creation went with her banshee Mark Skodacek created the material for the witch brew your thoughts and comment are well come

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Posted 21 June 2009 - 12:12 AM

Oh hell that looks scary ,I like the way that skelleton comes out .Looking very good
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Posted 21 June 2009 - 06:23 AM

Nice scene. There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop!

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Posted 21 June 2009 - 06:51 AM

Very good work!
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Posted 21 June 2009 - 10:38 AM

Thank you Steve :)
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Posted 21 June 2009 - 10:50 AM

There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop! I'm redoing Lena Turing the pages with a bend in the page.. thanks for noticing robcat I'll post the new renders
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Posted 21 June 2009 - 10:55 AM

Many Thanks Spleen
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 05:43 AM

There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop! robcat here is the newly rendered scenes, thanks again for pointing the out,
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:23 AM

Looks good especially the pages .Roberts got eyes like an hawk :lol:
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Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:40 AM

much improved!
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 06:26 AM

it's good to have eyes like an hawk letting you know when you mess up thanks guys
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Posted 28 June 2009 - 07:23 PM

Nice page turns, maybe just a bit more "plop" of those snails?

Who is she talking to? Herself? I suppose witches, being solitary would be self-talkers... :lol:

OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue -

"I need no oracle to tell ME what to do"

"The ancient book of shadows has the spell I need"

(fairy squeaks in protest)

"Yes, this will do quite nicely..."

"If I follow the spell precisely -
I'll finish with rotting entrails,
pinch of newt, a handful of snails!"

"Foulest of humours,
boiling and hissing
form vaporous tendrils,
a ghostly apparition!"

Short, succinct, to the point. And it seems more a chant than a monologue.

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Posted 30 June 2009 - 03:51 PM

OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue - I really like how you trimmed down script. so much so that I started re-placing the voice track ,and I like it so much better I'm redoing a couple of the animation I had a hard time converting this page to the movie.as you saw. the voice part was done, a few years back., so making changes is difficult. this is the original script from the book . actually Lena is talking to Grim her familiar . I really appreciate the time it took. I'll post the movie part as soon as its done again thanks so much Jessie
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Posted 30 June 2009 - 04:11 PM

OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue -

I really like how you trimmed down script. so much so that I started re-placing the voice track ,and I like it so much better I'm redoing a couple of the animation

I had a hard time converting this page to the movie.as you saw. the voice part was done, a few years back., so making changes is difficult.

this is the original script from the book . actually Lena is talking to Grim her familiar

. I really appreciate the time it took. I'll post the movie part as soon as its done again

thanks so much Jessie


Hum the picture did not show up, i'll post it with the improved part
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Posted 30 June 2009 - 08:16 PM

thanks so much Jessie


You're very welcome, Kat.
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