"I really like what you've done in this sequence and the dragon's voice is odd but compelling. It immediately captures me and draws me."
The dragon's voice,
I met Dede Brown, at a craft fair quite a few years ago. she offered to create a web site to sell all the characters that are in the book. She was computer savvy, I was not at all.
So Dede created my web site leaffairies.com, and managed it. She also agreed to record the voice of Dracolleen the Draco.
Her voice was perfect, but the recording quality was terrible.
Along the way, we lost contact, with no way to re record the voice. So with the help of a Diamond Cut Productions, a voice restorer program, it was able to remove most of the static. which left a hollow sound to the voice, that to me, sounds different from a human voice.
" A suggestion, if I may. I'd love to see a layer of (mostly transparent) cloud-like matter (noise/atmospherics?) overlaid on top of this sequence as that would really sell the effect of these characters moving through actual space/flying through the air. It would break the image out of a sense of being projected onto a 2D plane which you have nearly accomplished already. I don't think it would take much to achieve this as you could probably just overlay a scaled up version of the clouds you have elsewhere in the scene."
Sorry about the distress call, but I'm glad it was the banshee and not a child. I had to read your instructions twice. What a good idea, i will see what i can come up with. Thank you Rodney