First pass. Mostly just major poses and walk cycles.

Holmes,
You are really getting good at this!

At a first pass that looks really great.

Good. A few points:

1) In my animations, I made a big Guard so he can reach Gloria. Can you scale up one of them by 114%?
2) Maybe Gloria could struggle a little?
3) Is there a glitch in the transition from Krewl to the group at the end?

Lol, the surprised reactions were funny. Maybe it's the timing but it made me laugh.

A couple of things caught my eye:

1. Pon and SCs reactions are too similar. Maybe bring SC's hands up to his face, something like Fear but not as extreme!
2. The lingering view of Pon at the end is a full bust+ view yet neck down should be hidden by the cart. The transition from hidden to not hidden just looks a little odd to me.

Cheers

Second pass.

Done. I also gave him a brush hat.


Overloading a "struggling" chor action on top of the walk cycle and the "roped" actions are causing some problems.
I think I'm going to have to say she is too depressed to struggle at the moment.


I saw that too. But it doesn't seem to occur in the latest shaded render.


Thank You!


Adjusted SC's reaction.


Changed the camera. Should be more congruent now.

That's cool. Just a little thing....in the last shot, Trot is very still. I think a little head movement or a blink would make it. Though I didn't see it the first time. It all depends on where the viewer is looking!

Thanks


Oh yes, I didn't notice that before.