May 31 2009, 12:53 PM
Okay, here's my first go at it:Click to view attachment
May 31 2009, 12:58 PM
Only thing is that in the beginning - it wasn't totally obvious (to me) that Pirate catches the ball - perhaps - he needs some recoiling action? I had to replay to understand what the connection was between first and 2nd cuts.
BUT I love the final gag - very very funny, clever
May 31 2009, 01:08 PM
I see what you're talking about. I'll see what I can do to get that across better.
May 31 2009, 01:28 PM
Ho hum and a bottle of rum, that was awesome fun, well done
May 31 2009, 01:47 PM
hehe yea thats good ,I realy like the charactor with the teeth or lack of
May 31 2009, 03:22 PM
Looks good, Mark! You could rock the ship around, independent of the camera, and that could be the force which causes the cannon to flip back. Time is just about out though I guess.
May 31 2009, 04:22 PM
Paul: That's a really good idea, but yeah, that would take a whole lot of time to accomplish. I wonder if it would look too weird if it only happened in that one shot?
I'm playing right now with trying to adjust the colors of the video to see if I can make it look better. I may be overdoing it...Click to view attachment
On the left is the original, on the right is the modified.
May 31 2009, 04:58 PM
May 31 2009, 05:39 PM
you should do this type of stuff all the time...oh yeah you are now...nice !
May 31 2009, 07:29 PM
Hopefully I'll get better at it. I struggled with this one!
May 31 2009, 09:35 PM
itīs a great entry Largento...I like so much
As usual, excellence abounds in skillful hands.
There's really only one thing to say: AAArrrrrhhhhhhtfully done!
Jun 1 2009, 08:10 AM
Nice animation Mark! I think it could benefit a lot from sound. Particularly the explosion.
Jun 1 2009, 01:06 PM
You are right, Ken. I just wonder if sound will work with whatever audio is going to be running over the whole. But, just for kicks, here's the clip with sound effects:Click to view attachment
Jun 1 2009, 01:45 PM
terrific! absolutely terrific!
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