I've add a sky as was suggested, It brighten it up.thanks again for pointing that out. I am going to be adding a narrator, as Martin suggested... just have to write it . any comment welcome

Katt,

I love the characters and I admire your perseverance to this project. I do think the camera action is a little choppy but it's coming along great!!!

Really good work!!!

George

I did bite off quite a bit when I started this project.
I'm still working on this segment, so I might , be able to trim some of the camera movement.
Thank you George

Hey Katt. I just love the story you have. If you ever want any help to get your story/dream finished, just ask. I'll try to help you with anything you need. You have me on Skype, I want to here from you at least once a week, if not more.

Real nice charectors ,it looks and sound's real good well done ,looking forward to seing more

Thank you Mark and double thaks for the offer, as soon as i get caught up to where the guys are in the mist, your awesome mist, i have a watery muddy segment, that maybe I'll be able to get your expertise.

Thank you Steve , t's always nice to get feed back.

Sounds good Katt.