The first one would have depended a lot on how the vocal artist played Gloria in the rest of the script.
I liked the third one best. In retrospect, I think it sounds an awful lot like something from Sally Rogers and Claudia Schmidt (sorry for the obscure reference) from an album they did called
Closing the Distance that I haven't heard in probably 10 years. However, it has almost a feeling of Henry Higgins singing to Eliza Dolittle.
I also liked the second one quite a bit. It was generic at first, but then I slightly broke the pattern I followed at places to make things interesting. It made me feel slightly clever.

I'll probably try to get
I Don't Want To Go There closer to done and come up with some concepts for
Balloons before continuing with this one.
Martin -- I think the phrase " No matter how blah" doesn't really work when sung. We might have to rewrite that one line. Maybe "dull"?
I don't know about you guys, but I really enjoyed coming up with multiple concepts for a song. First of all, it forces me to play with the style and words and phrasing and timing and tempo and time signature and chord patterns and arrangement. Second, it doesn't really take all that long to do, especially if you know you're going to "throw out" all but one of the choices. Third, it gives you guys more to choose from. Fourth, even if we throw out all but one of the choices, we can save the ideas for something else in the future.
At work, we're deploying what we've been working on tomorrow afternoon. It will probably take about a week to get all the kinks out, but I should have more time beginning this weekend to work on SO music.