Blocking.

Great blocking, Dhar!

Here are the notes for going forward...

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thanks!

Regarding SC's pose, I tried having him slam the sign flat on the ground like you had suggested in your first commensMP4, but I'd have to lean him so far down that his hat would cover all of his head and half his body. He'd also have to lean so far down that his head would almost rest on his right knee. My solution was to simply lower the sign to the ground.

It can't be done?

Not the way you acted out.

Is this close?

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Let me know if this is close to what you want so I can start tweening

They said it couldn't be done! That'll show them!



Those look good.

- woot's ending pose looks off balance, like he's about to fall on his butt. It may be necessary for his left foot move somewhat.

- the scarcrow is going to be pointing at the card to start, right?

- would it be stronger to switch the two Tinman "up" poses so the last one was more to the camera?

- I feel like the Scarecrow's head should hit its down pose on "post!" but maybe that's too late in the shot? On the other hand if he has moment more to do that move you can fit an exasperated eyeroll into the midst of it.

Woot work

That looks good!

-A little less waterballoon-head on his initial take I think.

-He'll need a slight bounce on the beat while he's singing

-and then, how about he glances to TinWoodman ("did I get it right?") on the beat right after "Zee"

New Year update

New Year crit...


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I mentioned that maybe the Tinman's move needs to be slower... I'm thinking now that maybe he does that by lingering a bit more in his anticipation before he springs up.

I delayed some of the poses as much as I could. I guess I started tweening a little too early which makes things more difficult later in the game. But, I hope this'll pass

Woot looks great.

Scarecrow is better too. You could translate scarecrow's hand to his head so it isn't sliding over his face.


Tinman... Is that like... 2 frame longer? He was hitting late already. You'd have more room to expand if you started him sooner rather than finished him later.

Is this close?

That looks wonderful!

I feel like the scarecrow should be doing something while he's waiting his turn to start "ACTING"... but I don't know what to suggest that wouldn't be distracting from what the Tinman is doing. So let's say it's perfect the way it is.

Don't go runnin' off now, there's one more itsy-bitsy, teeny-weeny shot coming your way.

A couple of blinks maybe?

ok, try that.