Hi,

Some personal problems kept me away from the Two Project but I'm back, trying to do the work that I love: to animate!

Here's the first take with only the initial poses. I had some doubts about blending actions but I'm working on it.


I will to animate and tweak the scene this weekend to show some upgrades.


Best regards and sorry about my poor and ugly english.

It looks pretty good but the camera move is distracting. The camera should follow Tinman rather than racing ahead. Try keeping the camera still until you have finished the acting and then, if you really need to move the camera, make it a smoother motion. Reframing this shot might be all that is needed.
Nice start!

Thank you Paul and sorry for the delay,

I was very busy the last week but I'm trying to finish my assignment.

Here is the Take 2...

It's generally good, but I agree with Paul the camera move is way too fast. Did you change it at all? I would suggest moving the camera a few frames after Tinman starts to move and end it a few frames before the end of the shot. You could also try moving the camera back abit to reduce the travel distance.

PS You could also translate TWs head bone. His neck looks very contorted.

Thank you for your feedback and critiques, Paul and Ken. Your comments are greatly appreciated!

Here is new update