hi!
This is my fist anime model. Pls give me comment

mr piece,

he looks great! good overall anime feel!

i see potential for improvement in the mouth area, but it's an awesome first!

-jon

nice job um...how did you do the head.i still suck at making a head i can do wvey thing else but make a head.

nice job um...how did you do the head.i still suck at making a head i can do evey thing else but make a head.when i do it it dosn't turn out right.mainly the eyes have a weird shape.this is mainly cause i can't draw front veiw face only side and angle.
first target look(angle)
then i do a front(sorry it so big i havn't had time to size it)

Mr.Jon
Thanks u give me a comment.
how do i to improvement in the mouth area, can u give a sample to see it.
thank

his lips seema little thin, but it might be as simple as not having toon lines around the lips.

for example, characters from the show 'one piece' don't really seem to have much in the way of lips at all.. just the occasional line to hint at a lower lip.

-jon

Very nice. Great job thus far.

Mr. The_Black_Mage
i follow this tutorial to do the model.

http://home9.highway.ne.jp/katakata/tuto/h...mdl/head01.html
this is my model rough drawing for rotoscope

thanks Jon
ur opinion is very good. i will go to improvement in the mouth area.
thanks

thank Mr.Rodney

Some inherent talent and a nice tutorial make a good combination. Very nice first attempt. You've got something there. Keep posting as you progress in your skills.

Eric

A One Piece fan! w00!

Looking really nice!

Couple things - The teeth look a bit dull to me, may want to increase their ambience (the eyes too) and maybe change their toon-line color to anything but black (like a light blue for the teeth, brown for the skin)

To get rid of the crinkly looking shadows on the left side of his face take a look at the thread called "Jagged Shadows - A solution" They'll end up looking a lot smoother like the shadows falling onto the right side of the face.

Oh and eyelids!

...i've tried that tutoral...I JUST CAN't DRAW THE FRONT OF A FACE!!!!!T_T

Mr.the_black_mage
u can refer and read more japan comics to learn their drawing skill, i used to do it.
comics recommand:
masakazu katsura - ZETMAN
maya natsume - TENJHO TENGE
u-jin - PEACH

i know i love anime i read manga when ever possible but i can't do the front of a face free hand.i've tried starting with circles and every thing, nothing works.i can do angled,side but not front.

and don't call me mister...

mr bm: if you really suck that bad, then stick to giant robots or something.

if you really want to learn, then draw faces, and try to suck a little less,

...then try some more. lather, rinse, repeat.

eventually you'll suck hardly at all.

-jon
sucking less every day.

wow thats encuraging....nice pep talk.this will ony last for a little while long i nomaly improve over time i'll get it right eventualy.you should see how i drew last year compared to now...


and stop with the mr.!!!

haha...friend...its me mansonsoon...
need to give u some comment about your modeling..ar..？
ur model quilky ok..la..but the face..look so fat a bit...and lighting its no so well so much~~!!
haahh~~~ keep it up~~!!

plz don't take this as an offence but your not very good at english, right?

Where do I start. Bite tongue...OW! Ooooh- thats rich! The old kettle calling the pot black.

Hey One Piece...I like your character. I would like to see you add some eyelash or eyeliner to help define his eyes....but overall, it has a nice, clean look!

what?...ok you lost me...

Hilarious!



one_piece,

Nice job!
Could we see a wireframe view from under the nose a bit?

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Diu~~ English not very well..can't give any comment....?? yes..my english so poor...!!
i acept it, so..? i it's poor person and low class people also, but i like study~~! izit can't
be make friend here..?? if have any wrong word...i to say sorry here~~!

nonono, its not a problem. i just thought it was kinda funny(but i'm not making fun of you), it also reminds me of a time about 5 years a go when i had a speach problem, i'd say bird as buud...amoung other things too. but i gotta admit don't stop typing your responses like that even if your english improves, it makes it cool and fun to read your posts.

I really like it. Also, thanks for tutorial link that I have missed before.

Nice start, it would be nice to see whole model once finished. Even better, to see it move. Keep us posted!

thank ur all comment
nimblepix this picture i my model under the nose "shade & wireframe" view.

hmmm, more spline desity than i thought......