Hello,

It is rough and models are not all complete.

Scene; Kate is dreaming and in the medical bay leaning over frank, who is dead. Well, ah, maybe...

http://www.hennesproductions.com/portfolio/frank_cut_1.mov

Comments are always appreciated, I have been staring at it for a awhile. I am always interested to hear what people see.


William

Nice work!

The biggest thing that hits me is Kates nose. It seems like it's really upturned and very snout-ish.

Also during her reaction her head comes to a sudden stop, try easing that out a bit. Move the torso a bit there too.

Looking forward to more.

Good looking models! The screen direction (apparent orientation of the characters) is rather ambiguous throughout, which makes it unclear that what we are seeing is what she is looking at. Or are we seeing what Frank is seeing? Either way, not clear and it's reducing the effectiveness of what your trying to get across.

But that's good looking stuff.

Actually I don't get it.

It looks good, but I still don't make all the connections.

David

Thanks for all the comments and feed back, you guys are awesome!

I understand that it all seems disconnected, my appologise. The next version will have more of the blanks filled in I promise. Also, I will have backgounds in.

William