Robert-Jank
Sep 14 2005, 12:29 PM
I was wondering if you guys could give me a little help on this pic. what else could be done?
jon
Sep 14 2005, 12:45 PM
rj,
the question that immediately jumps out at me is 'why are you so far away from your subjects?'
what are you trying to say with this picture?
-jon
Robert-Jank
Sep 14 2005, 01:15 PM

Oh the picture? thats just something i threw togeter in a couple of mins i was just using it as an example of how my anime rendering looks.
jon
Sep 14 2005, 02:13 PM
well, then limiting my comments to the characters themselves, they seem kind of open.
the hard boundaries between color shifts should be pushed out away from the edges a bit, and define the volumes facing more towards the camera.
does that make sense?
-jon
Robert-Jank
Sep 14 2005, 05:45 PM

I think so i will see what i can do.....
Julian
Sep 15 2005, 03:33 PM
| QUOTE (jon @ Sep 14 2005, 03:13 PM) |
the hard boundaries between color shifts should be pushed out away from the edges a bit, and define the volumes facing more towards the camera.
does that make sense? |
That can be done by rotating the light so it points more toward the side. But what I'd suggest most of all is reducing the thickness of the lines.
Rodney
Sep 16 2005, 03:01 PM
I think you will find Matthew Krick's Anime Tutorials interesting... especially the rendering part in your case.
Link:
http://demented3d.com/tutorial/Rodney